From a draft of a soliciting letter mailed to me recently, for my signature (details concealed):
[Institution X has made N grants to scholars over the years] – people who have and are making important contributions to [science].
(The problematic piece is boldfaced.) The draft was prepared by highly educated people who write a lot in their work, but still they came up with this example of a classic type of non-parallel coordination, with two conjoined complement-taking verbs (here, perfect have and progressive are) but a complement with a verb form appropriate only to the second, and not to the first (perfect have governs a past participle, progressive are a present participle: have made, are making). This is “government of verb form by the nearest”.
What I said to the colleague (and friend) who sent me the draft is that I have in fact studied the phenomenon, adding:
I don’t view it as a lapse in grammar, but a great many people do, and I would probably look foolish if this went out under my name. Grammatical sticklers would insist on:
… people who have made and are making …
Actually, I used to view such examples as lapses in grammar, but over the years I have softened my assessment. As far as I know, I don’t use this sort of government myself, but I have come to think that for many people it’s not an inadvertent error, as many usage advisers have thought, but just an aspect of a grammar somewhat different from mine — a variant construction.
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